She posts a picture and in 140 characters or less, you are to write a story or short poem based on the picture. I have two stories and a poem to share, I hope you like them.
It's not that, Antonio, it's this ocean...it's making me sick.
(100 characters)
~Heeeey! what's your name? I'll bet you're a Virgo. How about we take a dip later tonight? whata-ya say?
you, me, the moonlight...
(130 characters)
~Echoing waves awaken the spirits
as the moonlight so gently appears
troubled souls gather with hope
to wash away their faults and their fears
(139 characters)
I loved your posts as well! I think my favorite is the 2nd one.
ReplyDeleteThree fun takes on the pic of the week, Maria! The first two really gave me a great giggle for the evening and the last one is lovely! Hope you have a great week!!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
Great poem! Lovely imagery.
ReplyDeleteThe last one is my favourite. Great stuff :O)
ReplyDeleteYep, I can just hear Bird #2 making all those bad pick up line comments. You made me grin.
ReplyDeleteI liked them all, with #3 being my favorite.
ReplyDeleteMaria;
ReplyDeleteI lost my comment. Sorry if you get two.
I love the way you give us laughter and beauty in your MF.
Lovely!
You're adventurous. I can muster one! Liked them all but my heart loves the poem.
ReplyDeletethe poem is lovely, very poignant
ReplyDeleteand I love Fifi and Antonio :)
Aw a seasick pigeon! ;)
ReplyDeleteWow! Three goodies. I particularly like the voice in #2.
ReplyDeleteHappy New year.
Now this is poetry! This was my favorite although I did get a chuckle over the other two...
ReplyDeleteWow, Maria, three for the price of one--way to go! I liked all three--the first two made me laugh and I love the poetic, dreamy last one a lot for its imagery.
ReplyDeleteOkay I liked them all too - but liked number 3 the best! sandie
ReplyDeleteechoeing waves...
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great.
Have a wonderful week.
Maria...
ReplyDeleteYou really embraced this theme!
Most Excellent
I think I met the human counterpart of that second pigeon in a bar one time.
ReplyDeleteI think the last one was used to woe in the moonlight
ReplyDeletequite nice
Ha - on Quilly's comment - wonder if it was the same guy
It's a bonus, 3 at a time. I like them all!
ReplyDeleteYour first two entries ar cRAzY-fun, but it's the third that really touched me:
ReplyDelete"Echoing waves awaken the spirits
as the moonlight so gently appears
troubled souls gather with hope
to wash away their faults and their fears"
Thank you, SprkleFarkle~~~~~*
(May a Happy New Year be yours!)
Very nice, Maria. The last one is special here!
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year. Thank you for your visit and nice comment. Sorry I am late.
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Hope you didn't just get duct tape and bubble gum in your Christmas stocking! All the best for the new year and thanks for all the visits in 2010..nick
ReplyDeleteWow, you're really good at that. I would just look at them and think - 'Darn pigeons pooping on my fence.' lol.
ReplyDeleteHope you have a Happy New Year's.
Great job!!
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